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LUCY STARTED A NEW STORY?! MAN WHERE HAVE I BEEN. Oh yeah, up at the mountains where I receive no internet or cell phone reception. |: :smt039 So here's the ...

:smt039 as if nothing were wrong Change were to was(: could feel it himself, that sense of ignorance, ebbing at the hollows of his heart No need for the coma ...

Hmm... I choose birds eye view! Okay, here we go! ... Wow. So, I got my quote ready and nothing! It's so good! I didn't see any mistakes!! All right, ...

Hi! :smt039 Please, please comment! A little background info: Why: I read a National Geographic article on this. I know my Neanderthals, thankyou. Where: this is set in what would ...

njamin Montgomery knew he was outclassed the moment his Nemesis laid a hand on him; he was faster, he was stronger, an he had better technique. O: Wrestling?! I love ...

Hey wiseman! (: As I promised, I'll do the best I can! I'm not that experienced with poems but I think I know enough. Like the clouds with their rain ...

OHOH I WIN I WIN. idk what I win at but I think it's that I know you in person, yay! :D Okay, time for one of Olivia's THOROUGH reviews, ...

Well, hello! I haven't read the other parts so if I have some pretty obvious questions, I'm sorry. Aightt, let's get this started, son! So here it is, the culmination ...

Hola!(; First order of business - did you write this in Notepad? I remember I use to write in notepad and when I posted my work it would be spaced ...

2/2 thorough review! :D “I maybe should have waited?” Should be: Maybe I should have waited? zonked Did you mean 'zoned' or is that some English slang I don't know ...

HOLY CHRISTMAS CAKES OF CHRIST. I'm here. I'm reviewing. So let's get this dizzle started! Srsbisnz (serious business) I'm truly ever so sorry for all this delaying! HERE IS ONE ...

HI! okay here we go. leaving his six months pregnant wife behind. How tragic. Well when we first start reading this, we're not exactly sure if this is in first ...

Hey. I got your message so Im back! :D Okay, let's see. breath I feel this should be 'breaths'. He was totally unaware of what she was about to do. ...

Hey, Im sorry for this taking oh so long. I'm about to shoot school off the face of the universe []:< Anyways, let's see... “Here come the lovers” was the ...

Look at Lucy go with all her reviews, Little miss popular over hurr(: Haha okay let's see... Oh.. wow. Just, wow - great job. There's nothing wrong with it (from ...